Spelling mistakes:
*Necked legs→ naked legs
*are more about their appearanceS
*No matter what differenceS
*she praised delicious food which Taiwan has long been famous for.
→she praised delicious food and beautiful lanscape
*"she gets a new perspective of collage – try to learn something of everything instead of study only. And she FIND herself truly a hot-blooded girl." (tense)
Improper conclusion:
It can improve our diplomatic relationship
→This is the main purpose for youngers to broaden their minds.
*Necked legs→ naked legs
*are more about their appearanceS
*No matter what differenceS
*she praised delicious food which Taiwan has long been famous for.
→she praised delicious food and beautiful lanscape
*"she gets a new perspective of collage – try to learn something of everything instead of study only. And she FIND herself truly a hot-blooded girl." (tense)
Improper conclusion:
It can improve our diplomatic relationship
→This is the main purpose for youngers to broaden their minds.
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