Google Chrome catches users' eyes! [revised]

There are kinds of Internet servers afforded  to users

NCU, T.W.─ Google chrome formally got champion among servers in globe. While in Taiwan, IE users still take the big part.

         A survey aims to learn about NCU students’ favorite internet server and their reasons. The tested are 130 members which male and female take equal part. Three major internet companies- IE, Google chrome, and Firefox afforded to choose. And there is an apparent result that 73.6% users choose Google chrome as their main server, only 15.2% of them use IE and 11.20% use Firefox.

Google Chrome's logo

The finding is that 60% users choose IE because of their long-time habit. However, Google users have diverse answers. The main one is its high speed of connecting Internet. " I cannot bear with IE's poor internet anymore!" one participant complains.  One fifths of users like its plain design with only a Google mark and a searching  column in home page. In addition, there are design settings for users to personalize their own page (iGoogle). This research shows an apparent mainstream of "Google hot" among teenagers. many IE users would like to replace old one with the effective one.

If IE attempts to retain Taiwaneses' hearts in the future, it must offer more special functions to compete with big rival Google. Consumers get more and more novel service in the future. And Our Internet life will be advanced through this positive competition.

                                         IE users' reasons

Google chrome users' reasons

picture resources:

Google Chrome http://www.googleappsforedu.com/google-chrome-tips/

Internet servers http://www.life.com.tw/?act=view&news_no=12659

Criticism of my draft

1.      In last paragraph, the two questions are improper to put together, for first one is not finish completely, I add another question after it.

2.      I should add more angle in last paragraph so that it will be more interesting.

      “In the future. Whether IE can still occupy Taiwanese' heart? how it compete with Google this powerful rival? users can look forward its improvement and enjoy more convenient functions!”

3.      Grammar usage mistakes.

4.      This kind of article belong to survey. So I should focus on analyzing the phenomenon instead of making story.

5.      Avoid to use “we” as subject.

Google chrome catches users' eyes!

NCU, T.W.─ Google chrome formally got champion among servers in globe. While in Taiwan, IE users still take the big part.

         A survey aims to learn about NCU students’ favorite internet server and their reasons. The tested are 130 members which male and female take equal part. Three major internet companies- IE, Google chrome, and Firefox afforded to choose. And there is an apparent result that 73.6% users choose Google chrome as their main server, only 15.2% of them use IE and 11.20% use Firefox. 

 We analyze deeply, 60% IE users opt because their long-time habit. However, Google users have diversity answers. The main one is its high speed of connecting Internet. " I cannot bare with IE's poor internet anymore!" one participant complains.  One fifths users like its plain design with only a Google mark and a searching  column in home page. In addition, there are design settings for users to personalize their own page (iGoogle). This research show an apparent mainstream of "Google hot"  among teenagers. many IE users would like to replace old one with effective one. In the future. Whether IE can still occupy Taiwanese' heart? how it compete with Google this powerful rival? users can look forward its improvement and enjoy more convenient functions!

 IE users' reasons

      Google chrome users' reasons